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Fidelity ch1 - Enter the sinner.
Contributed by
spiffyphil
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:52:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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There was a time when people didn't lear,
His face fresh as a young boy's youth,
The warmth from his wife - hed never fear,
Of course, these chapters very much prove...
Innocence and bliss would be ripped away,
and with that pain a souless man now walks,
Vengence sought to each and every day,
His insanity echos through his talks.
It seems this town has never seen a man with milky eyes. People stare and pull thier hair at this hideous creature, they much despise. This young man's face, much out of place, was drenched in blood. He took two steps, only to collapse, and fall face first into the mud. Time passed by, none dare to spy, on the condition of this poor soul. A little girl, with glossy white pearl, ran over to the bloody pool...
Sir, Sir are you okay?
You're in no condition I must very much say,
I'll get a doctor - just lay there and stay,
The young man who had stained the street. Seemingly unconcious, so very weak, and to the girls surprise she had heard a squeek. The man had uttered, leave, leave leave...
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Re: Fidelity ch1 - Enter the sinner.
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by reprobate on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 10:20:30 AM AEST
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| sad but in a twisted sense...liked it, thought it needs to be a part 1, though. would like see some more along this. thanks. |
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Re: Fidelity ch1 - Enter the sinner.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 03:14:01 PM AEST
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| It's sad. I have the sense that events are contracted - I mean that there is more here that was not written down. |
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