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My deadly desire
Contributed by
Kirby
on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:28:37 PM in AEST
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A soft breeze whispers obscebites,
into my unending emptyness.
My eyes of the darkest blue,
bleed with the tears of desire.
Love is something of the utmoset treasure,
only found in the deepest seas.
The turnips in the sandy halls
clutter my innocent decadence.
With there words I swear to you,
I'd live a thousand years just to make u love me.
Copyright ©
Kirby
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2004-04-23 16:28:37]
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Re: My deadly desire
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:33:15 PM AEST
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| Well done, i enjoyed it very much. |
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Re: My deadly desire
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by OMEGA_ on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:41:12 PM AEST
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| well done,great |
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Re: My deadly desire
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by jaeann on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:01:27 PM AEST
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| clutter my innocent decadence........brilliant !!!! |
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Re: My deadly desire
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:35:48 PM AEST
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My eyes of the darkest blue,
bleed with the tears of desire.
I loved that part it made me think there was more to this poem then there really was.
nice write
-Victoria- |
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Re: My deadly desire
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by Remy on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:42:27 PM AEST
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brooding thoughts make some lovely emotional jargon sometimes, otherwise known as poetry... i like this! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: My deadly desire
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 10:44:08 AM AEST
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"I'd live a thousand years just to make u love me" That line alone left me in an emotional state.
Spellbinding
Roses
Larry |
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Re: My deadly desire
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by arden on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:10:33 PM AEST
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this was just pure awesome!
wow this was great. i loved it.
so well written and great use of words.
well done.
Arden |
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Re: My deadly desire
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 21st May 2004 @ 09:12:07 PM AEST
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beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: My deadly desire
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by pinkunicornoctober on
Tuesday, 28th September 2010 @ 06:10:56 AM AEST
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| I love this! I've felt just like this before...Great Job! |
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