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Life
Contributed by
Dragontear27
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:04:24 PM in AEST
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Life stays the same no matter what you do
you think things change but they stay the same
people tell you it will get better but that's not true
in the end it turns out to be a game
It starts bad and just gets worse
and i can't fix my life i'm in to far
im starting to think my life is a curse
it's like im bottled up inside a jar
My life has spiraled down the drain
but i make my life and the things i do
i know i'll make it so i'm not insane
I'm the one that controls my life not you.
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Dragontear27
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2004-04-23 16:04:24]
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Re: Life
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:08:50 PM AEST
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Been there, totally relate to this poem. But it does get better, if and only if you are willing to change.
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Re: Life
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by Remy on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:31:28 PM AEST
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pessimism always seems to has it's day somewhere... but no worries, that last line should get you through! nice write... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Life
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by Pyrofungus on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:01:31 PM AEST
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I completely understand.......
The line "people tell you it will get better but that's not true" ha ha I know that line way to well...infact I know this poem way to well
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