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life, death, and mercilous rape
Contributed by
PoOkSiE
on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:03:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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the people who want to live
are the ones who get screwed over and die
and the people who get stuck with the life
are those who wanted to commit suicide
cause little susey
never thought that she'd die young
she sawl the man approaching her
and tried but couldn't run
he took out his weapon
and shot her in her chest
sawl the blood dripping down her clevage
and knew the perfect way to lay her body to rest
he took off her blood soaked
lavender t shirt
and began to slide his hand
way up her skirt
he ripped off her panties
he could hear her cry
and knew it wouldn't be long
until she finaly died
he tore through her body
raping her mercicously
by the time he had finished
her soul was floating free
he left the traces of himself
way deep inside of her
did she die somewhere in the middle of the act?
he just wasn't sure
some people found her later
naked in the cold
that same night
her family was told
everyone knew it was tragic
everyone was really scared
but as they cried for their loved one
the pervert was already paired
with his next vitim
a beatiful young girl
the things he did to her
would make your hair curl
but he had a thing for these virgins
capturing the essence of death
enjoying an orgasm
as his victim took their last breath
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PoOkSiE
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2004-04-23 16:03:10]
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Re: life, death, and mercilous rape
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:05:42 PM AEST
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very good write.
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Re: life, death, and mercilous rape
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by Merry on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:48:14 PM AEST
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a dark commentary on our times and the atrocities that are headlines - where do these monsters come from?
A very edgy peice of writing -
merry |
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Re: life, death, and mercilous rape
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by Remy on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:29:45 PM AEST
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*shudders* f***ing sickos, i hate perverts like that... sad to think they're still allowed to roam the streets...
~Remy~ |
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