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race
Contributed by
princesspurty
on
Monday, 30th September 2002 @ 07:50:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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race against the tides that pull us further apart
fullfill a destiny for lovers hearts
race against a storm that is to be our doom
fight against the coldness thats in our room
race against the world for it will change
race against what is old and welcome the
strange
race against time to be near on another
race to finish line , we are two strong lovers
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2002-09-30 07:50:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: race
(User Rating: 1 ) by Aidan on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 06:02:08 PM AEST (User
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This is very good. There is a real sense of urgency and determination in the words. |
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