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Trust
Contributed by
lil_angel
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:07:32 PM in AEST
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Who can I trust?
Who wont stab me in the back?
For I can’t be left in the dust
And that is a fact
I am hurting but I can not show it
I am the strong one
For each word my heart does it hit
I am not alone
I can trust some
But who will trust me
I want my friends to come
A listener I want to be
November 19th 2001
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Re: Trust
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by Black13 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:26:29 PM AEST
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| This was interesting. It spoke in a very interesting way to me (the reader). I thoroughly enjoyed it. Nice job lil_angel. |
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Re: Trust
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by Remy on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:15:52 PM AEST
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nice to dig up your own roots once in awhlie, and this is some good writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Trust
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:47:00 PM AEST
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| very good. trust can kill you or set you free. excellent ending. |
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