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Maybe you should
Contributed by
deepdarkthinker
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:07:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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How could you do it
Why did you do it
Does it make you happy to take a pure and precious thing from a child watching her scream and cry knowing your killing her mentally scarring her for life DId you know that for the rest of her life she will wake up screaming afraid of walking down the street or not letting any other man get close to her physically or emotionally in case you didn'e know i spent the last 11 years of my life going to phychatery when I finnaly relized that i wasnt the one with the promblem I wasnt the one who took a 5 year old innonce maybe u should go to a shrienk and listen to her tell u that your menatlly unstable and your depressed and have to take pills for the rest of your tenage life and try to get on with your life with scars on your wrists. Do you see what you've done to me and all you got was 10 years. I hope i've got my point through that not only did you hurt me but you hurt my family and freinds.
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Re: Maybe you should
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:59:36 PM AEST
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| Very good, kinda hard to read in paragraph form but well done! Great job! |
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Re: Maybe you should
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by Brians_Sweety on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:49:42 PM AEST
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Sandi,
This is an awesome poem!!! I am sorry I know I read it earlier at school but it didn't come through as much as it did right now!!! That is soooo awesome. I am sooo sorry you had to go through all of that. If I could I would let you know who go to the army but only if he would shoot that donkey first!!! lol. I love you girl and just remember me and the guys are always here for you no matter what!!!
Stephanie |
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Re: Maybe you should
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by Remy on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 03:10:58 PM AEST
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oi vey... tough stuff to dig up and throw out onto a page, hope the message went across to the intended...
~Remy~ |
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