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The Dentist
Contributed by
parkman
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:25:38 PM in AEST
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Reclining in your chair, staring at the light
Cannot see a thing, it's shining far too bright
Feel your needle against my gum, injecting liquid cold
My mouth now going numb, freezing process taking hold
I hear your drill against my teeth, enamel shatters everywhere
Smell the burning as you drill, getting far too much to bare
With my tongue I feel the holes, ragged and so rough
I open my eyes and look at you, staring from above
Now I feel you probing, filliing them so tight
Being able to smile again, as the numbness goes tonight
What a visit this has been, one I could do without
Saving my teeth, at least for now, that's what it's all about
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Re: The Dentist
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:56:38 PM AEST
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| Cute write! Well done! Good job! |
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Re: The Dentist
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by jaeann on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:00:48 PM AEST
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| morbidly real.....dealthly terrifying.......decay or not decay.........no question.......no dentist thank you......i'll just keep flossing.......... |
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Re: The Dentist
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:38:23 PM AEST
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yukk dentists
funny poem though |
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Re: The Dentist
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by Remy on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:53:37 PM AEST
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oi vey... i can't remember going to the dentist - and i've a feeling i wouldn't like it one bit! lol, but nice storytelling! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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