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The Cheeseburger
Contributed by
parkman
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:24:08 PM in AEST
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It sits in its bun, so inviting
Mustard and relish, both combining
Lusting after, this tasty snack
Mouth watering, you try to hold back
Temptation is strong, head moves forward
Licking your lips, hot and bothered
Tongue touches the cheese, melting sensation
The burgers about to reach, it's destination
Mouth slips over, burger and bun
Slowly bite, a tender one
Got the taste, biting again
Taste on your tongue, drives you insane
Now you've finished, taken the lot
Beef, cheese and relish, left feeling hot
Wanting more of, taste buds delight
Mmm the cheeseburger, a beautiful sight
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parkman
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2004-04-23 13:24:08]
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Re: The Cheeseburger
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:40:08 PM AEST
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| a sensuous poem about a cheeseburger, lmao, im glad i just had lunch, very cute:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Cheeseburger
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:10:34 PM AEST
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OMG, this is almost erotic. Even after all the haute cuisines I have eaten around the world, nothing incites my tastebuds like a hot juicy cheeseburger. The taste is almost orgasmic at times. Masterful write.
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Re: The Cheeseburger
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by youlied on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:23:35 PM AEST
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| This is funny, it sounds like me when I talk about food while hungry...mmm...Good poem. |
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Re: The Cheeseburger
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by New_York_Chick on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:37:00 PM AEST
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| made me laugh lol good work |
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Re: The Cheeseburger
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:56:57 PM AEST
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| when I first started reading I thought you were talking about somthing other than a CHEESEBURGER lol nice write though |
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Re: The Cheeseburger
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by Whisper on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:12:35 PM AEST
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Good one. Almost made me run da door to get one. :-)
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Re: The Cheeseburger
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by Whisper on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:13:01 PM AEST
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Good one. Almost made me run out da door to get one. :-)
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