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perfect
Contributed by
wyrd_faerie
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:06:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I sit with this stained photograph
Your beautiful eyes, the longest I can look now
Without you watching
This is the closest I can come to you now
Your heart, so many barriers formed around
I could have loved you forever, my darling
I could have loved you for my whole life
One touch makes me shiver inside
Every kiss from you just reminds me how to die
One word and I just break down and cry
And oh, you are so perfect
My love…so perfect
And broken hearts can be never be replaced
They will never be the same, my love
And…oh…I was so in love with you
So many parts of your heart I knew
Trust so sacred…and I could have loved you for eternity
I could have loved forever, my darling
I could have loved you for my whole life
And please, just take it all
Don’t leave me with my memories
It’s too painful to look at you
And just remember all we used to have
And oh, you are so beautiful
Please, my love, my angel, my perfect
My one and only, please
Just go
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wyrd_faerie
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2004-04-23 13:06:32]
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Re: perfect
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:11:52 PM AEST
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beautiful poem Lucie I don't know what to say this is just so sad. I'm awestruck at the beauty in your words.
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Re: perfect
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by Kie on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:16:40 PM AEST
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This was sad and resonated with very deep feelings. It really touched my heart.
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Re: perfect
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by lostinmyself on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:30:37 PM AEST
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| aww, this is so sad, and so beautiful. there is so much emotion here, i can feel it. stay strong. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: perfect
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by youlied on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:13:46 PM AEST
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| Wow, this is....amazing. Great poem. |
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Re: perfect
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by shelby on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:50:35 PM AEST
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your heart and soul and pain poured from this heartbreaking write almost had me in tears.
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Re: perfect
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by Black13 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:31:09 PM AEST
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What else can I say other than "Wow"?
This was incredible and I've felt that way.
This was very well constructed and executed.
Awesome write. |
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Re: perfect
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:35:12 PM AEST
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ohhh lucie, this is so beautifully heartfelt!! i do hope emily reads this, surely she will be moved, i hope everything works out soon.... big hugs n' love you, nessa
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Re: perfect
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by amalyna on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:09:49 PM AEST
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| very touching....I could really feel the message in your words. i've been there before and reading this brought me right back there. very nice write. |
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Re: perfect
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by M on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:14:20 AM AEST
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Oh Lucie. I miss you so much it hurts. You are the most perfect person in my life, and i don't know how to live without you here besides me. You were my air, my earth, my soul, and to think that i may have lost you forever tears me apart. I know words are of little effect at the moment, but even if you only read it: I love you.
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