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If only..
Contributed by
blackmarker
on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 12:21:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Faded images,
Of what used to be,
Of how things once were,
Before it all went wrong,
Before you left me,
Did I do something wrong?
Did I make you angry?
Is that why you left?
Is it my fault?
I blame myself,
I blame my actions,
If only,
If only I had been better,
Would you have stayed then?
If only,
If only I had been different,
Would you have stayed then?
Did I do something wrong?
Did I make you angry?
Is that why you left?
Was I so unlovable,
So terrible,
That you couldn’t even stand to be near me?
Is it my fault?
I blame myself,
I blame my actions,
If only,
If only I had been better…
But no,
It’s too late,
It’s gone too far,
There’s no turning back now,
No turning back,
Things are too far gone,
I know things will never change,
Things happen the way they are meant to,
It’s Gods will,
But how,
How could a God be so cruel?
How could He take you away from me?
I don’t believe,
Don’t believe He would,
So instead,
I blame myself,
I blame my actions,
If only,
If only I had been different,
If only I had been better,
Maybe you would have stayed,
Maybe you wouldn’t have left me,
Left me alone,
Without you,
If only,
If only I had been better,
Would you have stayed then?
If only,
If only I had been different,
Would you have stayed then?
Would you have stayed?
If only,
If only…
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blackmarker
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2004-04-23 12:21:52]
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Re: If only..
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 12:48:51 PM AEST
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| a good poem of self contemplation, i wouldnt berate myself like that though, people change, life goes on.... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: If only..
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by PhoX on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:02:04 PM AEST
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hey, i really liked that one, good write.
PhoX. |
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Re: If only..
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by Remy on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:42:04 PM AEST
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man... i remember thinking like this... a nice look inside, slightly depressing. but all-in-all it's good writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: If only..
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:50:55 PM AEST
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aww wow this is wicked.. the repetition works really well.. great stuff..
charlotte x_x_x |
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