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Senility Of A Teenager
Contributed by
OMEGA_
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Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:26:08 AM in AEST
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9AM and it's only me
Lie on my bed like an oldster
Boring silence
Noise of my brain frequencies
I turned on the TV.
Nothing interesting to hear
And nothing interesting to see
My phone beside me
It randomly ringing
But why I reply?
It's the same usual singing
Have no one to talk to
Nobody worth a call
They are all the same
No one real at all
What shall I do?
Shall I turn my back and sleep?
Or shall I talk to the walls?
Even the Internet I surfed waiting for recalls
But still have no reply
Other than some empty souls
At the end
Its the same only friend
I brought a paper and my poor old pen
Complaining my pain
Writing insane
Writing so pure
Reflecting all the deepness inside my bleeding core
Will it be the only way?
Will it be my only cure?
Actually I became no longer sure...
Is anybody for me here?
Anybody will share?
Anybody will care?
Am I alone?
Am I weird?
Why do all of you keep writing?
Are you also searching for the same thing?
Or you all just surrendered to the same only friend?
Is anybody will try?
Is anybody will reply?
Is anybody will make my loneliness tears dry?
The day looks so long
Time is hardly passing by
And I still alone on my bed as a very old guy
Waiting for a real help till the hope leave my sky...
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OMEGA_
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2004-04-23 06:26:08]
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Re: Senility Of A Teenager
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by OMEGA_ on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:41:16 AM AEST
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Will anybody reply my call?
Is anybody looking for me? |
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Re: Senility Of A Teenager
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:31:24 AM AEST
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| I loved it, I like the frankness in which you addressed all your questions. Very thought-provoking too; I guess I do write to help me in searching for that meaning in my life, unknown and blurry as it is. Great write here, I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: Senility Of A Teenager
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:32:02 AM AEST
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Good poem. I like the way your 'poor old pen' flows, if a little disconcertingly sad.
I keep writing poetry because I'm avoiding investing all my effort into something I should be doing instead. Something far more difficult and personally demanding. |
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Re: Senility Of A Teenager
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:08:43 AM AEST
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My dear friend...U write very good! I red other ones and I think u are a good writer> When will u write a book hun?
Kisses from your friend from Brazil!!!!!
Rayana |
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Re: Senility Of A Teenager
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:27:55 AM AEST
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wow ya amgad,this is really beautiful. i love the way you correlate your pain with an old man. keep writing
mai... |
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Re: Senility Of A Teenager
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by shelby on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:05:03 AM AEST
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very honest and detailed write your feeling came through. Feeling noone is near is the worst feeling in this world. You will find an abundance of shining souls and friends here at YPDC !! If you ever want to chat my email is sweet_tweety33@yahoo.com
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Re: Senility Of A Teenager
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 04:07:51 PM AEST
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Amgad....
you wrote what i feel inside from time to time....it's a great feeling when u find someone says what u wanna say....Go On My dear friend and wish u the best of luck |
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Re: Senility Of A Teenager
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:27:25 AM AEST
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very sad but beautifully written.
I can relate at times.
I think everyone can relate at one time or the other or maybe even a thousand times.
U r very creative and unique.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Senility Of A Teenager
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by arden on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:24:36 PM AEST
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i really liked this.
somewhat sad but awesome nontheless.
wonderfully done. keep it up. i look forward to more.
Arden |
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Re: Senility Of A Teenager
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:06:36 PM AEST
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Excellent Poem, OMEGA. I can feel the bittersweet sadness, of this madening masterpiece. Wonderful.
Lindsey |
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Re: Senility Of A Teenager
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:21:52 PM AEST
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| You are worth time, and a call, your worth more then you know, i dont know you or i would try to help you more. |
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