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Angel Splattered
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:24:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Chaos, this,
Anarchy, Now
WHAT THE *****??
I am too nice,
too soft,
...too hurt...
(i''m a pussy)
I am an
a**hole,
i''m a jerk,
...so ***** mean...
(i''m a *****bag)
So WHAT?!
and how?
do I care?
...do i now...?
So here,
bottom line
unpoetic
hate this rhyme
and i hate you
you ***** retard.
YOU''RE A ***** RETARD
now so not poetic
now so not poetic
now so not poetic
unpoetic
hate me, love
me
(you can''t do either right...)
Social Retard
now let it come, let it go,
...let the ***** words flow...
...
Limp away, Retard.
try and run from me,
lest you realize
(these steel eyes)
you realize i''m right
and walk away, Victim.
before I make you bleed.
(i was never against you
until you convinced me of the need)
perfect angel splattered red
perfect angel splattered red
perfect angel splattered red
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-04-23 03:24:24]
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Re: Angel Splattered
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 05:37:12 AM AEST
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I wish there were audio comments, so you could hear me applauding this! Damn fine work indeed.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Angel Splattered
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 02:16:29 PM AEST
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| *applauds you* this one was amazing, i can relate to this one down to a T... exellent 5/5 |
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Re: Angel Splattered
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by FleurdeSang on
Saturday, 25th June 2005 @ 10:37:18 PM AEST
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237,859,602,156,301,576,023,650,365,016,723,502,374,012,320 gold medals from me to you!!!! I wish I had more to say than that and
F
L
A
W
L
E
S
S
!
...but I don't, lol. I will try again, cheri. As you know... my insomnia doesn't allow suitable word flow to course through my fingertips... All my love and apologies for this pitiful comment (I will return and give this masterpiece the praise it deserves soon enough!). Forever,
Your eternal friend and most avid fan,
~*Stephy*~ ***STANDING OVATION!*** |
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