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this is my life
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:25:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I stabbed myself through my heart,
just to stop the pain of loving you,
please make it go away,
please make it go away..
I know I can't have you...
I cried today,
tears of shame,
why should I love you?
why shouldn't I love you?
answer me..
pick me up,
or strike me down..
is it worth this pain?
peel back my skin,
find the ashes..
..all that left of my heart,
I don't think duct tape will work,
but is it even worth a try?
tomorrow will just be the same...
this is my life...
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Re: this is my life
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:40:04 PM AEST
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Good writting.
Things change, who knows? maybe things are for the best, or things will turn to make your situation better. I pray and hope you are safe and careful. |
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Re: this is my life
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by Black13 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 11:16:24 PM AEST
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So very powerful in so few words.
I should have read your work sooner.
I liked this piece. It was very good.
It shows the pain of loss without being able to let go, at least in the easy sense. |
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Re: this is my life
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:04:31 AM AEST
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| Very heartbreaking poem, full of pain and confusion. You've expressed your emotions in volumes here. |
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Re: this is my life
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by Leoniboge on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:55:08 AM AEST
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I relate to this, and I'm sure so many people will too. It's beautiful. (I don't know i you meant to do this but....) The lack of capital letters and rules makes it so much more real.... like it's taken everything out of you, and so you haven't got the energy. Brilliant.
Leo xxXXxx |
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Re: this is my life
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by Stitch on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 12:42:59 PM AEST
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Crying and writing...crying and writing. It's like that for a while. This is very good. I especially like the lines about peeling back the skin and finding the ashes. Still rolling, girl.
Stitch |
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Re: this is my life
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 11th September 2020 @ 01:14:53 AM AEST
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| Very heartfelt write |
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Re: this is my life
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 11th September 2020 @ 01:14:54 AM AEST
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| Very heartfelt write |
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