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Betrayal?
Contributed by
xfrozenwindx
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:21:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I remember so long ago,
When it was always just me and you.
I remember the fun and laughter we shared,
The tears and arguements too.
But for some reason,
You left me for good.
You had tore away,
All the promises you could.
Everything was gone,
You had changed so fast.
All the memories we shared,
Were now in the past.
And later now, I finally see.......
The one who had really changed was me.
Copyright ©
xfrozenwindx
... [
2004-04-22 22:21:16]
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Re: Betrayal?
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by Justalady on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:25:12 PM AEST
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I think it's very good. And later now, I finally see.......
The one who had really changed was me.
Not often I see anyone admit to that. June |
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Re: Betrayal?
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by PhoX on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 11:28:19 PM AEST
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Excellent!!! absolutly love this poem, its something i can really caonnect with lately it seems. great write
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