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My suicide described
Contributed by
srugglingyoungster
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:17:48 PM in AEST
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The suicidal inasance,
the idiotic blindness,
the certain pain,
lives on forever
I wanna break down,
I wanna cry.
The knife wont
quit shaking,
neither will my hand,
i wanna get this over with,
and say my last goodbye.
when all time froze,
no one was there.
I needed help,
but no one would care.
Now its too late, its all done and over.
I said goodbye,
let out a scream,
fell to the floor,
and let myself die.
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srugglingyoungster
... [
2004-04-22 21:17:48]
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Re: My suicide described
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:40:25 PM AEST
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| Awww hon *hugs* this was sooo sad....very well done though! |
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Re: My suicide described
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by chris3btine77 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:46:06 PM AEST
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| excellent write |
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