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Mortal Temples
Contributed by
Emil
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Sunday, 29th September 2002 @ 09:15:00 PM in AEST
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We're all mortal temples
Worshiping whatever we like,
Some worship oblivion
Some - desperate prayers in the dead of night.
Few worship acceptance,
and none worship love.
It's been turned into obsession -
Never getting enough!
Copyright ©
Emil
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2002-09-29 21:15:00]
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Re: Mortal Temples
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by aernby on
Sunday, 29th September 2002 @ 09:28:24 PM AEST
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A good write/ a good read.
One suggestion: line four could read:
Some - desperate prayers in the night.
It sounds better to my ear
fwiw
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Re: Mortal Temples
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th September 2002 @ 10:43:38 AM AEST
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You really like that phrase dun you babe :p
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Re: Mortal Temples
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by Emil on
Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 08:41:52 AM AEST
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| I tend to agree with your suggestion... =) |
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