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!!* Demonic Souls *!!
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 08:12:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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They stand at the entrance
of Hell's fiery gates,
awaiting the master,
these dark figures
are filled with demonic souls.
They are lost
from all humanity,
they murdered,
tortured,
raped,
and pillaged
the Angelic souls
upon the earth.
God tossed their
hateful, demonic souls
into the fiery
pits of Hell,
never to return.
The Devil possesses
the very fabric
of their being,
they were lost once
they started doing
the Devil's evil bidding.
Their evil master
shows his face
and laughs
at the presence,
of his followers.
"Welcome my children,
welcome home."
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.19/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-04-22 20:12:07]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: !!* Demonic Souls *!!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 08:28:40 PM AEST
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Gee, I hope you don't get any darker than this! You wrote a powerful piece here. I have met a lot of these demons in my career and haved prayed many times over that they truly do get their justice and do their time in the River of Styx. There are still too many walking around free doing evil demonic deeds.
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Re: !!* Demonic Souls *!!
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:08:38 PM AEST
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ah ya i say thats pretty dark writing.
great write though.:) |
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Re: !!* Demonic Souls *!!
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by arden on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:15:07 PM AEST
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ohhhhh this was so cool!!
i loved the dark writes the best and you do it awesomely. i loved this.
great job, i hope i see more of these from you :)
Arden |
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Re: !!* Demonic Souls *!!
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by AnGeL_M on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:21:47 PM AEST
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WoW Sis This Is Really Good I Like It !!!!!!!
Excellent Write :-) Cynthia
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
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Re: !!* Demonic Souls *!!
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:26:19 PM AEST
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| oooooo! |
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Re: !!* Demonic Souls *!!
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by venkat on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:26:35 AM AEST
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aaaah!!!!
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Re: !!* Demonic Souls *!!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 04:25:27 AM AEST
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Smouldering and asphyxiating visions I had, staring into the background of this one, Cynthia.
Good work. |
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Re: !!* Demonic Souls *!!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 06:49:37 PM AEST
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| very gothic. I think I'm in love. |
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