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Kindred Darkness
Contributed by
Black13
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:52:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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With dying heartbeat
love fades in gentle defeat.
Shadowed spirits gasp for air;
as hands choke them beyond despair.
Broken wings feel unmendable
when love seems so expendable.
Fate twines inner hate forever
when you always surrender.
People just come and go, steady flow;
always playing their part of the show.
With no escape but that in death,
and only true rest found, a bed of earth.
I should see some beauty in it all,
but too much flaw won't let beauty stand tall.
So for life I'm left laughing in the rain,
with every felt pain that won't let me explain.
Left looking crazy as the fool, my part;
when thoughts of suicide won't soon depart.
Copyright ©
Black13
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2004-04-22 18:52:42]
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Re: Kindred Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:01:44 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. |
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Re: Kindred Darkness
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:09:27 PM AEST
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| beautiful expression of feelings:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Kindred Darkness
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by hope on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 11:20:54 PM AEST
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Very well written...it flows very nicely. I love ...with every felt pain that won't let me explain....I am anticipating more works!! God Bless
hope |
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Re: Kindred Darkness
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by shelby on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:54:06 AM AEST
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I felt every word I know what this is you captured my soul with this one beautiful
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Re: Kindred Darkness
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by Stitch on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:52:01 AM AEST
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Seems to be a common pain among poets. This is telling and intriguing. I like the feel of it. Nice write.
Stitch |
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Re: Kindred Darkness
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by jaeann on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:42:36 PM AEST
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| with every felt pain that won't let me explain...........wow....awesome write........ |
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Re: Kindred Darkness
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by Stitch on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:58:09 PM AEST
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Intriguing write. Nice flow. Very impressive for a first post.
Stitch |
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Re: Kindred Darkness
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by arden on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:57:51 AM AEST
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wowie... i love this.
i love how dark and deep this is.
the rhyme was amazing.
well done. keep it up.
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Re: Kindred Darkness
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by venkat on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 01:37:12 AM AEST
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| very good style. beautifully written..you have good command on rhyming..Best of luck. venkat |
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