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Obselete
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:24:41 PM in AEST
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Tossed aside.
Bruised and swollen.
I need this to make me whole.
This is Obselete.
Your god has crushed me.
This time and so many times before.
Gag me or torture me.
Thats all I get.
Your words hit my face,
The big black book has fallen to the floor.
We wade into the blackness.
Just to put our dirty little hands on the big black book.
I need somekind of sanity.
Im sorry you wasted your time creating me.
Your tone my voice.
You forsakend me one to many times.
Feeding me spoonfulls of *****.
Knowing I dont have a mouth to digest with.
Life is one neon circus for you.
The flurescent lights twicker and catch fire.
Just so you can show your power.
Good nor evil.
I wont be apart of it.
Who's to say good is always right.
Without evil you cant distinguish good from evil,
I am evil.
Your not of me.
Your good.
Copyright ©
Mortis-Dark
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Re: Obselete
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:36:11 PM AEST
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| very well done, nice and dark. The imigary is great. The yin/yang Taoist referance in the last verse is a nice touch. I like this a lot. |
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Re: Obselete
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:51:07 PM AEST
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| hard to have things shoved down ones throat, excellent expression of feelings:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Obselete
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:51:45 PM AEST
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This is dark and insightful.
Fuel for thought.
Enjoyed this one.
Kie |
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Re: Obselete
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:39:29 PM AEST
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this is a dark write that actually isn't too depressing, has a philosopher's touch to it... i like!! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Obselete
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 12:47:00 AM AEST
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Dont apologize for posting! I celebrate when I see you have posted again. And this one is just as exceptional as all the rest. You are a true talent Mortis. Great job with this one...
Lindsey |
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