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Blind
Contributed by
ARemoteHeart
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:44:23 PM in AEST
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It makes me so mad
When you claim the things you do
Cutting, bleeding, purging
Those are all things I know, too
If only you weren't blind
You'd see me standing here
Someone for you to lean on
A friend, who will always care
I know what you're going through
I've been there once before
My throat, internally bleeding
My wrists were cut and torn
So now that it's you, not me
I remember how it was
People always stressing you out
Name calling, push and shove
And even if I loved them
I didn't care at all
I'd still starve myself and cut my arms
I didn't care how far I'd fall
Please, hear me crying
I would miss you way too much
Uncover your eyes, would you?
And see what I have for you...
That's love.
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ARemoteHeart
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2004-04-22 17:44:23]
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Re: Blind
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:49:36 PM AEST
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| Very well done! Good job! |
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Re: Blind
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:50:03 PM AEST
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| nice show of emotions. god bless |
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Re: Blind
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by williamdye on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:15:16 PM AEST
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| great write! |
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Re: Blind
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:26:07 PM AEST
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You should think of giving this poem to your friend. It really touched my heart and sometimes a person will listen when they know you've been there. You may not be able to change the behavior but you can light the bulb of awareness.
A heartwrenching poem.
Kie |
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Re: Blind
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:53:35 PM AEST
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oi vey, can't say i've strolled down that path just yet... and still, some sense of familiarity lingers. i like your writing style, good stuff... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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