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From Beautiful To Hideous
Contributed by
sicknivesevered
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:53:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Your noises used to be cute
Now they make me puke
Seeing you was a pleasure
Now my mind is severed
I wish that we could talk
My teeth are grinding; locked
And as I drive away
I think of ours...
All the things I loved
Have all now decayed
Into the black they're shoved
Its all blistered to hate
And it sickens me
That I still wish to know
What you think of me
It seems I can't let go
Your beauty has been lost
It's all a blur to me
But as the curves they cross
Your greed I can see
You might have thought me selfish
But I just had needs
Yours were filled regardless
While I was left to bleed
Well, I won't crawl back
I will see to that
You can just keep walking
I will just keep writing
I know that I won't talk
My teeth are grinding; locked
But as I drive away
I think of ours....
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Re: From Beautiful To Hideous
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:58:36 PM AEST
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oi vey, what a stark contrast this is... but a determined theme nevertheless! great writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: From Beautiful To Hideous
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:17:49 PM AEST
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| this is different ........i like this one......... |
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Re: From Beautiful To Hideous
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by skachickcallie on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 02:57:09 PM AEST
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| powerful,......sounds good........ |
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Re: From Beautiful To Hideous
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by bonolove on
Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 12:42:11 AM AEST
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| ....just keep writing. sometimes its the only thing you have to get through things. good poem! |
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