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The Symphony
Contributed by
Rickaby
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:32:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Take to my conviction
A spirit of your religeon
As better days
Form force field rays
That build walls of contradiction
I locked my soul within
My bitter stone faced grin
And as i sit
Behind walls of *****
My head begins to spin
The days are growing colder
As chips fall from my shoulder
My memory shall linger
As i poke my tiny finger
Into the eyes of the beholder
Maybe i'll stay awhile
Sort life in single file
Sure ill probably loose
But i will always choose
To take it with a smile....
Copyright ©
Rickaby
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2004-04-22 15:32:27]
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Re: The Symphony
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:35:14 PM AEST
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eww... i'm not good at taking it with a smile sometimes... but a good reminder, nice writing! ;0)
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Re: The Symphony
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:44:05 PM AEST
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| great write! we all need to be reminded to try to take it with a smile. |
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Re: The Symphony
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th May 2004 @ 07:43:30 AM AEST
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| different...liked the ending |
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