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I LOVED YOU!
Contributed by
PhoX
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:44:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I LOVED YOU!
My love for you it runs so deep
Yet I feel so used and cheap.
With my love falsely renewed
My entire heart I give to you.
You take my heart without a blink.
But not once did you stop to think.
Did you love me as I loved you,
Or where you there to simply bid adieu.
You played me like a cheaply made game
You tugged on every string of my heart
Taking aim
And striking like a dart.
My love was real!
Why was yours not?
Not once did you feel as I feel?
Instead you left my heart to rot.
Well my pain will soon be gone
No more thoughts shall run through my head.
Before the break of dawn
With just one round I will be dead.
I LOVED YOU!
By:
Korey R. M.
Copyright ©
PhoX
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2004-04-22 14:44:26]
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Re: I LOVED YOU!
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:53:19 PM AEST
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hum... unrequited love, sad story of many... though still - i liked this writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: I LOVED YOU!
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:15:07 PM AEST
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I can say that my love was real, I can say that i will never feel again. But this poem sounds exactly like the things i would say. It is strange to know that in a world of so many that i have a match. Love is normal, love is cruel, but it doesnt always have to be. I loved and I will never be in love again, but thank you for sharing the same feelings because I know outside of my body i am not alone, but inside i am doomed for solitude. Thank you anyways. In due time a poet will get their of glory and it is always nice to know that it is all yours and always will be.
--Megan Corey Gonzales (poet / philosipher) |
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Re: I LOVED YOU!
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:48:37 PM AEST
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| a bit scary..but great write. |
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Re: I LOVED YOU!
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:39:05 PM AEST
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| very sad..... im here if you'd like to talk, hugs n'love nessa |
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