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The First Time
Contributed by
reilt
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:40:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I think I bled the first time.
My eyes are pools of salt
Again.
Your voice catches and carries
On a wave.
My indecision fears its tone
And begs to know:
Are you asking or telling?
Do little girls fall away
And become women
In the space of a minute
Between your lips and hips?
Is that what you have made of me?
A deeper shade?
Blood red,
The first time,
Ever,
I was loved.
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reilt
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2004-04-22 14:40:21]
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Re: The First Time
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:46:39 PM AEST
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nice write, i liked the prospective of it... ;0)
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Re: The First Time
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:38:11 PM AEST
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A very powerful poem.
"Do little girls fall away
And become women"
Priceless words.
Kie
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