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edge
Contributed by
dolly_dagger
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:58:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Don't try and tip me.
I'm strong.
I'm strong and I'll stay that way
As long as I've got my dusty book friends
To compose new worlds for me to escape to.
As long as I've got the paintings
Beautiful and infinite rough seas by the solemn wise man
Or skin and colour, winding steps and dark chattering promises brushed by the young one with the agile imagination.
As long as I've got my music
To ferry me to deserted islands with
warm inspirational quicksand
I wouldn't care
About leaving
About being tipped a little too far
I'll spill my love, I'll spill my laughter
But to me, I'll never be less than half-full
So you're welcome
to a Taste...
Copyright ©
dolly_dagger
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2004-04-22 13:58:24]
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Re: edge
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:05:28 PM AEST
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interesting, i wanna have a sip! lol... i like the way you wrote this, good stuff! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: edge
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by bernard on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:12:55 PM AEST
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I would never trip anyone at least not knowingly. Your poem suggests a keen mind on young shoulders. I love the way that you have written your poem it is excellent. congratulations.
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Re: edge
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:10:08 PM AEST
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BEAUTIFUL SO VERY BEAUTIFUL
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Re: edge
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by Stitch on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 07:07:59 PM AEST
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I'm very glad that I took Jarred's advice and came over here to look at your stuff.
A very interesting and lovely write.
Keep it up.
Stitch |
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Re: edge
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by Broken-glass on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:35:46 AM AEST
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| I love the last line. In a way, the rest of the line builds up to it... I don't know, its hard to explain. I really liked the way you offered the 'Taste', it gave a really great effect. b-g xxxx |
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Re: edge
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:32:37 PM AEST
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| i must say that i am also glad i listened to jarred, for this is a very beautiful poem, you have great imagination. i love the words you use in this, brilliant. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: edge
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:53:50 PM AEST
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| A poem with immense strength. Great write. We all need to reming ourselves how strong we really are. Good message. :) |
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Re: edge
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by Chade on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:51:08 PM AEST
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Another amazingly strong poem.
Chade |
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