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Wishes
Contributed by
PhoX
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:55:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Wishes:
Oh I wish I had no eyes,
To never see you leave again,
And make them cry.
I wish I had no hands,
No fingers to feel your soft skin
Slip out of my grasp.
Oh how I wish I had lost my sense of smell,
No longer reminded of your scent.
As nothing can compare not even a rose.
And it would be grand to lose my heart
No more would it weep with love for you
Every time you break it.
Finally there are emotions, lets not forget these.
For without them no other wishes matter
These are why my eyes cry and why my heart loves.
No matter how much I wish I cannot seem to lose these.
Without you I am nothing,
And how I wish to end it all, to once again be non-existent.
Oh how I wish you knew,
The way in which I feel.
A Wish to make you love me as I love you
Now that is a wish, I wish could come through.
By:
Korey R. M.
Copyright ©
PhoX
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2004-04-22 13:55:51]
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Re: Wishes
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:00:23 PM AEST
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do you realize the repercussions of that wish? if it came true you'd be worse than a vegetable! you'd be an amoeba, and you'd get squashed pretty quickly! lol, don't ask what brought that up... good write! ;0)
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Re: Wishes
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by reilt on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:08:09 PM AEST
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| i liked this poem a lot...i hope your wish comes true if it's what you really want and that it makes you happy |
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Re: Wishes
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by bernard on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:08:24 PM AEST
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Where would we be without wishes. They are important for both young and old.Your wish comes from an unhappy bond between two people and that is very hard to put right. Please remember that life goes on, other wishes come and will surely go but you will have to decide on which wish you want to come true. I wish you luck and happiness in the coming furure.
bernard. |
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