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I Want Candy
Contributed by
parkman
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:25:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I want candy, from that man
He says I can have, all I can
Watched me playing, for over an hour
Smiling at me and waving me over
He talks to me, really sweet
Wants to know if, I’d like a treat
Tells me I’ve got, nice blonde hair
Says he’s got a secret, he’d like to share
Making me laugh, with his funny talk
Says he’s got puppies, that I could walk
Wants to take me in his car, with him
Take me for a little spin
He puts his hand out, to take mine
I don’t trust him, not this time
There’s something about him, he has bared
I start to scream , because I am scared
I start to run, to get away
Hear the man shout, little girl, hey !
I don’t stop, I run straight home
Leave that man sitting, all alone
Tell my mum, the police she phones
They go to the park, he still sits alone
Waiting on his next, the police grab the man
Take him away, in the back of their van
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Re: I Want Candy
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:38:30 PM AEST
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oi vey... sick sad little world for that man, sad to think there's people like him! good write thou... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: I Want Candy
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:28:03 PM AEST
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| sick and twisted ppl make me so mad, there was one at the playground when my kiddlings were little who walked around with a leash saying hed lost his pupp, this poem is excellent and should be posted where kids can read it, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I Want Candy
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:11:03 PM AEST
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maybe if we went back to old fashioned punishments like a rope tied to an old oak tree these people would think twice about their actions and harming our children sick pieces of crap! great write.
michelle |
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Re: I Want Candy
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:08:10 PM AEST
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creepy...
Bobo (Joel) |
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