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Die Scum Die
Contributed by
parkman
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:23:33 PM in AEST
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It’s time for you to die
You know the reason why
You dirty piece of scum
Pay for what you done
………………………………...
You murdered my girl, only aged two
Kicked her head, as she stared up at you
What did she see, as she met her death
What thoughts, as she took her last breath
Forgive you for what you done, you’re joking
Still fight back the tears and the choking
My sweet baby, innocent, you stole from me
Claiming remorsefulness, as you made your plea
Revenge will be now, revenge will be mine
I’ve kept this thought, for a very long time
Now you’re out, you think you are free
Keep looking over your shoulder, expect to meet me
I have a knife, a razor sharp edge
Into your heart, is where it will wedge
Twist it around, here you beg why
This is for my baby, die scum die
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parkman
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Re: Die Scum Die
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:35:22 PM AEST
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oi, i hope to be far far away from you when you come upon your quest! interesting write, it kept me brooding over it awhile... ;0)
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Re: Die Scum Die
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by poet_of_anger on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:09:43 PM AEST
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Very dark, very well written, i want to say that i wish you the best of luck, but i do not know if that would be wise. Very nice write.
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Re: Die Scum Die
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:16:12 PM AEST
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VERY POWERFUL WRITE I HOPE IT IS NOT YOUR TRUTH
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Re: Die Scum Die
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:06:49 PM AEST
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a very happy poem and very well written. I loved it.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Die Scum Die
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:31:27 PM AEST
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| Great poem!!! So much emotion. Quite dark, but hey, dark is awsome. Good job. |
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