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Cosmopolite
Contributed by
remy
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:03:41 PM in AEST
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and so you want to hear about it...
then you'll want to think you found it...
simple social, perfect perfect
potent picture, surface surface.
i for one have my washed my hands...
one day i think you'd understand...
stringent suckled child of stupid
oh no? well prove it! prove it!
come on now, don't you feel so proud?
tearing ground updside...
oh come now, wear all your colours loud!
the principle never lied...
and when you come you're butting in...
just trying to help with your genuine...
joking gesture, fickle facet
of troubled truths like dropping acid.
i wish i could supplement a feeling to you
where accomplishment counts on through...
future focus falls in shambles
so soon! just ramble! ramble!
come to now, i heard you're feeling proud
tearing the town updside...
come in now, wasted into the crowd!
the purpose won't ever hide...
reality sinkers gets pulled on all the time.
can feel yours? it's so heavy, top of the grade...
post-trauma syndrome couldn't justify your line.
are you fishing or just wishing another empty way?
strapped down to the floor
just as twenty times before
stroked on and struck out
won't care to figure out.
reaching now for more but
i've gone right out the door
handled well to the touch
finding loss it wasn't much.
come now...
[to my surrogate little sister, whom i worry of often...]
Copyright ©
remy
... [
2004-04-22 13:03:41]
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Re: Cosmopolite
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:07:08 PM AEST
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| This is great! |
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Re: Cosmopolite
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:14:41 PM AEST
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yikes... the situation doesn't sound too good but the write is, as always! :)
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Re: Cosmopolite
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:01:05 PM AEST
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Excellent!
The words just bounce off this poem.
Really good one.
Kie |
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Re: Cosmopolite
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:47:01 AM AEST
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Strong, rhythmic poem!
Ga zo door.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: Cosmopolite
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by AnGeL_M on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 12:16:46 PM AEST
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This Is Written With Alot Of Passion
Awesome Write Remy...Keep Em Coming
********LoVe**AnGeL**********
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Re: Cosmopolite
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by JennyFruFru on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:51:36 PM AEST
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| awww i can feel your concern......... you care alot about her... :) |
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