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Will???!!!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:33:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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will this darkness ever end?
will i find out who are my friends?
will i come through this only if i pray?
will it leave a stain,
or will i be free the play?
will i loose,
or will i win?
will i suffer,
or be stabbed again?
will she let me talk to her?
or will she skid my emotions through the dirt?
i reallly need to know this!
coz its makingmy head hurt!!!!!!
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Re: Will???!!!
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by Thivanka on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:45:22 PM AEST
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Hey, take it easy. You seem very angry in that poem, the words have flown out straight from the heart. Just take it easy.
May happiness be with you!
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Re: Will???!!!
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:59:51 PM AEST
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| Great job! I agree you seem really full of anger! Great job though! Hope things work out! |
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Re: Will???!!!
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:11:27 PM AEST
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there there deathdrop, in time this will all seem like a bad dream... good write, loud and brash and honest. i like it. ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Will???!!!
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:14:54 PM AEST
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| hey, i remember what it was like at school. stay strong, it will be ok. hope it all works out for you. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Will???!!!
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by Trisha on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:01:54 PM AEST
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| Hey DeathDrop. Hang In There. I Didn't Really Care About Hanging With Friends Because I Went To School Just Do What I Had To Do About Doing My Work. |
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