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Down the Drain
Contributed by
bleeding_chains
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:13:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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A shot into the dark
That makes time stand still
A living life now wasted
Just stand there
In the broken corner
And watch the blood
Run down the drain
And watch your blood run down the drain
Look into the mirror
See yourself
See the gun
Its your life now
A life now lost
To a silver flash
That painful gasp
So stand still now
And watch the blood run down the drain
Watch your blood run down the drain
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2004-04-22 12:13:26]
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Re: Down the Drain
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:18:50 PM AEST
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| powerful write. thats really good. feel better soon hun. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Down the Drain
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by deathdrop on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:21:03 PM AEST
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| i see exactly where you're comming from! coz i feel it too. you did an excellent job here. well done, i couldn't say it this well... |
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Re: Down the Drain
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:47:54 PM AEST
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| God write! It kinda sounds like someone telling me one of those stories where they make me close my eyes and push me. Great job!!! Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Down the Drain
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:15:53 PM AEST
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this seems like a haunting shakespearean theme, i can just imagine an old geezer muttering this on the hillside... looking down into the swamp! lol, don't ask! good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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