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Delayed Remorse
Contributed by
Thivanka
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 11:07:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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An acclaimed wastrel,
By my sentient body
Draped half-way in white,
Under the turquoise light.
An ancient articulate map,
An anecdote
Made for the paucity of facts,
Revealing his esoteric tracks.
I, been the sleuth & his kin,
Entranced
By the pristine, lifeless body,
It’s spacious information, made me tipsy.
A face manifold,
Pertaining
To my corpulent inheritance,
Dead, yet effervescent.
Golden times we spent together,
The camphoric age
Where we reveled till we were worn,
Are now, all gone.
~T.Perera~
Copyright ©
Thivanka
... [
2004-04-22 11:07:18]
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Re: Delayed Remorse
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:45:52 PM AEST
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wow... i'm awestruck at your writing style - superb!!
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Re: Delayed Remorse
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:59:49 PM AEST
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yes u do have a unique writing style and what I could understand was amazing. To go off on a tangent I'm going to go blow my nose.
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Re: Delayed Remorse
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:21:14 AM AEST
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Deep contact. Very thought-provoking. Ã?nd nice.
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Re: Delayed Remorse
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by faith_my_eyes on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 06:10:16 PM AEST
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| This is very haunting, beautifully written.... |
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