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Maim
Contributed by
Fairy
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 11:00:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Not sure how much longer I can keep
The knife locked away in my dresser drawer
I hear it teasing me,
Beckoning to put my depression on hold,
Just for a little while
That’s all I need to lose total self-control
I’m drowning in all this
And I almost wish
I’d sink completely to the bottom of this jade pool
I have already lost myself in this eternal war
So unaware of how much damage I’ve done
Wonder what I can do with a gun
Unsuspected, everything’s turned upside down
My feelings are scattered all over the place
I can’t even look at my own face
So ashamed of what I’ve done
And surprised that I didn’t see this coming
I’m tired of running away from my inner fears
Locking them inside, to mold and decay
Don’t know what to say
I tried to warn them that I wasn’t feeling sane
Let go of my hand
I wanna hide in my wonderland
Away from all man-kind
Somewhere far, far away
I’d give anything to not be constantly feeling this way
Overwhelming myself with things that aren’t real
Hoping I’ll believe my own childish lies
Can’t except reality,
When I’m not too sure what that is
Give me the courage to end this strife,
Please god, hand me the knife
Copyright ©
Fairy
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2004-04-22 11:00:12]
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Re: Maim
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by bleeding_chains on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:18:13 PM AEST
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| this is a beautiful but sad peom, i love it. |
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Re: Maim
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by Thivanka on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:50:56 PM AEST
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Hey, when I read this one I recalled my poem 'I Killed Myself' -it was written in the very same emotions as this. Great work!
~T.Perera~ |
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Re: Maim
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:55:08 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was truely amazing... Just beautiful... I feel those same exact feelings. I think the same thoughts, do the same things... I know how painful this feels... If you ever want tpo chat, you can pm me or email me at SweetInsanity6699@yahoo.com My internet is a bit screwey, so I don't know when exactly I'll be able to reply if you do write to me. I really loved your poem, it realy touched me. Just... wow. |
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Re: Maim
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:58:02 PM AEST
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wow this hit me hard I've been at almost this exact place so many times. Keep strong as you seem to be doing now.
Bobo (Joel) |
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