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My Offer
Contributed by
Nelly
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:38:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It is nothing but a thorny rose
Taken from the depths of Eden.
Nothing but a bittersweet berry
With poison within its beauty.
It is nothing like in heaven
With all angels’ rejoicing.
Nothing like anything
All pleasures and no pain.
This I offer thee my love,
A love of endless ugly.
A paradise inside of hell
With you and you and us.
I do not give a guarantee
That there will still be me,
For I shall die in the depths of hell
For you and you and us.
Copyright ©
Nelly
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2004-04-22 07:38:27]
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Re: My Offer
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:46:42 AM AEST
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Bittersweet romance. Good write.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: My Offer
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:18:31 PM AEST
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*sigh* this is nice to read, dreamy... fresh, i like it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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