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Mother: Simple Memories
Contributed by
spiffyphil
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Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:32:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It's like looking into loretta's eyes,
Jalapeno peppers, bread and milk - what a mix.
Those late night inventions of food voyuer,
Amidst lucy with pad and palette in hand,
Jotting down ideas and genious sketches,
Such simple memories I have of you,
I wouldn't trade them for the world,
Afterall, they're all I have left of you,
I wonder if theres pleasure in remembering,
Is it worth the pain when reality returns?
It hurts worse when I can't remember your face,
I assure myself that closing my eyes and...
seeing your healing face brings me closer,
closer to something I just can't understand,
Its so hard mother, theres so much I still need,
your love, your wisdom, your warmth, you.
Im a big strong guy, just like you wished for,
I cringe at every sin, every stupid mistake,
because I know I'll hear it from you eventually.
I love you loretta - my mother, my angel.
Copyright ©
spiffyphil
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2004-04-22 03:32:47]
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Re: Mother: Simple Memories
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:37:21 AM AEST
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Very touching and sweet. I really like this one.
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Re: Mother: Simple Memories
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by venkat on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:44:28 AM AEST
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| What a nice poem..wonderfully touches the heart...venkat |
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Re: Mother: Simple Memories
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:12:46 AM AEST
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Thank you for that, my mother died last year and i just cant put down in words how i feel, i can write about everything else but her i found this comforting and inspiring.
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Re: Mother: Simple Memories
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by bernard on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:50:27 AM AEST
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A Mother's love knows no bounds. It is a terrible thing to loose a Mother. My feelings go out to you at this sad time.
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Re: Mother: Simple Memories
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by thumper on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:04:30 AM AEST
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This is a very nice write. Touching, bittersweet.
How our mothers have such a deep impact on our lives. I liked this very much.
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