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Tangled Web (REVISED)
Contributed by
boricuacd
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:24:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Gently she places her hand on his
shoulder. Innocently arousing
emotions inside of them.
The sparks that once
ignited their souls in days of old,
once again flicker within them.
What began innocently
has boiled and run over,
out of control.
Swirling passions and lieing eyes
peering at strangers
in their homes.
Wretched deceit,
spun carefully around them,
entangles their thoughts.
Consuming them?
Feelings of unrequited love, and deadly snares
that entrap their minds.
Coaxed by fear, they are lead
to barren wastelands
of regret and sorrow.
Love forlorn seeks
the devils company and begets
transgression that can never be undone;
But love cherished blossoms
into fields of hope which shroud
all blemishes and beautify the soul.
The path is set before them,
and all is still, as the stage darkens
for the final curtain.
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boricuacd
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2004-04-22 03:24:00]
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Re: Tangled Web (REVISED)
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:27:12 AM AEST
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Very well done. Beautiful description of the power of love.
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Re: Tangled Web (REVISED)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:15:31 AM AEST
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beautifully written, an unmissable read.
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Re: Tangled Web (REVISED)
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:26:16 AM AEST
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| nicely done. |
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Re: Tangled Web (REVISED)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 10:09:30 AM AEST
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What made you decide to switch from prose poem to tercets? Any outside influences? I think you might want to change lieing to lying.
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