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Schizophrenia
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:17:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Another sleepless night.
Another pointless fight.
Why do the things I say never matter?
Nobody thinks that the things I think are important.
Is everyone THAT ignorant?
Or is what I have to say really THAT pointless?
Why is distance so important?
I didn't know that love could be measured in miles.
Why are you living with so much denial?
Distance means nothing to me.
It must mean something to you,
because of the things that you do.
Even through the distance,
I will persist with my persistance
until you know of my love's existance.
I will forgive the past,
and the wrongs you've done.
I will show you the moon.
I will show you the sun.
I guess my love is different than yours,
because mine has hope,
how about yours?
I would trade the air that I breathe
for the beauty I'd see,
if I could only see you smiling at me.
So tonight I'll dream,
as I usually do,
of a future so certain,
for me and for you.
Would you trade the life that you knew,
to be with me,
am I worth it to you?
Do you ever think the same way I do?
You may say it,
but I don't think I believe it coming from you.
I'm not calling you a liar,
I don't think you'd do that to me.
Is my writing as confusing to you
as it is to me?
I wish I could change things,
for me and for you.
But what I'm really trying to say is,
I love you.
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2004-04-22 03:17:09]
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Re: Schizophrenia
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:22:52 AM AEST
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Unorganized, maybe, but you build up the tension so well. Very touching. I love it.
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Re: Schizophrenia
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:19:20 AM AEST
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you say unorganised i say well written! excellent.
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Re: Schizophrenia
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by aboutdesouffle on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:23:36 PM AEST
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| Now i am a 'sufferer' of schizophrenia and i was expecting some brave new insight into this disease. However, I was pleasantly surprised at the actuality. Well done |
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Re: Schizophrenia
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by Winter_Mist2004 on
Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 07:48:48 PM AEST
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Well written, keep writting. :D
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