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Good ole days....
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:16:16 AM in AEST
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I miss the good ole days full of passion and true love
the ones that I could have sworn were sent from up above.
The days were filled with sunshine, and a smile filled my face.
And when a tear came sneaking by you would wisk it off my face
Your lips were soft and gentle and whispered graceful words
but these were the good ole days that were sent from up above
Tonight I sit here all alone and wonder what went wrong
Staring at the stars above for a time that seems so long
No more precious smiles, all thats left is empty tears
Bringin on the thoughts from up above of the good ole years....
Copyright ©
JennyFruFru
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2004-04-22 02:16:16]
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Re: Good ole days....
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by arakrune on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:18:27 AM AEST
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nice
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Re: Good ole days....
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by venkat on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:23:28 AM AEST
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| welldone Jenny.....venkat |
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Re: Good ole days....
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:27:35 AM AEST
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| Very sad with a nice nostalgic air. Well done. |
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Re: Good ole days....
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by emystar on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:28:44 AM AEST
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Very sad but beautifully written.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Good ole days....
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:38:14 AM AEST
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i know what went wrong for me, life hardened me! but i am going back to the good ol' days this friday i'm going to a two-tone, jamaican ska revival night, you know pork pie hats that sort of thing! i'm gonna be 17 again...A good thought provoking write!
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Re: Good ole days....
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by AspenGlow on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:56:14 AM AEST
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| Seems we reflect much this night, maybe different words, but coming from the same place. I like your version. Great. Thanks. |
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Re: Good ole days....
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:56:55 AM AEST
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Sweet melancholy clad in a wonderful poem.
Hugs,
Hur |
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Re: Good ole days....
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:06:47 AM AEST
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Beautifully said, Jenny....
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Re: Good ole days....
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by arden on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:16:33 AM AEST
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a lovely write. fill with emotion and depth.
love it. keep it up.
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Re: Good ole days....
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:05:40 PM AEST
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aww so full of melancholy, a beautiful poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Good ole days....
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:43:26 PM AEST
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A wonderful poem that echoed nostalgia and memories and sadness.
Very well expressed.
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Re: Good ole days....
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 07:52:54 PM AEST
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YOU DIDN'T GO WRONG OR LOSE ANYTHING,JUST SOMEONE ELSE THAT LOST A LOVE THAT WAS TO GOOD FOR THEM! YOU'RE AS SPECIAL AS THEY ARE NO GOOD!! GREAT POEM,TOO!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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Re: Good ole days....
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by Missy_7290 on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 12:41:45 AM AEST
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| This poem is off the hook i really,really like it i hope you read mine and have the same feelings. |
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