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420
Contributed by
patar420
on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 11:28:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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smoke unfurls
from my pipe
its that time again
time slows down
to a crawl
the clocks hands are stuck
dancing shadows
on the wall
make me laugh uncontrollabally
i cant seem to stand
my legs just wont move
i eat a piece of pizza
im returning to this place
you call earth
the clouds are dissapearing
smoke unfurls
from my pipe
its that time again
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2004-04-21 23:28:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: 420
(User Rating: 1 ) by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 11:32:19 PM AEST (User
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Very funny! Well done! Excellently stated! |
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Re: 420
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 11:42:43 PM AEST (User
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Well done. |
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Re: 420
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 12:23:45 AM AEST (User
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Well done, me smokum peace pipe.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: 420
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:13:52 AM AEST (User
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......it's that time again......why yes it is!! thank you for reminding me......this write rocks!!!! |
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