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End of Time
Contributed by
essentially9
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Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 09:13:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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End of Time
For ever second lost
There is something hiding it
It's Father Time's way
Of controlling your life
And you lose more time
To live your life
For every minute lost
There is something hiding it
It's Father Times way
Of controlling your life
And you lose more time
To live your life
For every hour lost
There is something hiding it
It's Father Time's way
Of controlling your life
And you lose more time
To live your life
Father Time's reign
Is about to end
The Revolution of Time
Will free your life
From dying
Every second of your life
Depends on now
Every minute and hour
Have led up till now
You must give it all
To live at all
You must never hold out
Or suffer without
Everything in life depends on now
And you can't lose yourself
Or you'll lose it all
For nothing in the end's time
For every second lost
You get a second more of death
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2004-04-21 21:13:15]
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Re: End of Time
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 10:29:06 PM AEST
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| I liked your style, but the first stanza should of had (x3.) But it was good. nice job. |
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Re: End of Time
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 11:26:35 PM AEST
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This Is Just Beautifully Written
I Love Your Style :-) You Have Great Talent As A Writer....Keep Em Coming
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
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