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Transfer of Power
Contributed by
Merry
on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 09:00:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Has sweet surrender been given up
Replaced by something far less sweet
Recanted words of love and devotion
Washed away
Are my eyes unable to clearly see
The love you say you freely give
With strings attached to every word
I love you
Where did time go in such a hurry
Taking the only thing I had of value
So many minutes unaccounted for
Clock is ticking
How do I know love keeps trying
When my unyielding heart weeps
So used to constant sorrow
You touch me
What can I think of your suggestion
Bluntly ridiculous to even think it
Eager to discover where it goes
I am alive
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Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-04-21 21:00:58]
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Re: Transfer of Power
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 10:49:39 PM AEST
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| I like it. But what caught me was the title and after words. good job. |
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Re: Transfer of Power
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 11:30:36 PM AEST
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WoW This Is Really Good I Love It..
...Keep Em Coming...
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: Transfer of Power
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 02:23:59 AM AEST
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loved it! more please!
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Re: Transfer of Power
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by bernard on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 03:58:30 AM AEST
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Lovely sad poem Merry. Yes you are very much alive your poetry tells me that, I see a different you in each poem that I read. thankyou and keep em coming
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Re: Transfer of Power
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:03:44 AM AEST
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You write with such depth and mystery---a powerful combination. This is another fascinating use of words. I love the line about time going in a hurry. I can feel the confusion and tension of emotions tinged with such sadness.
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