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Buoyancy
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:29:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Shh.
Pull your thoughts aside for a moment.
Can you hear
Amisdst the sea of frowns and sobs
The silence of a smile?
In the canvas white and grey
Of tarnished, blackened pain
Someone's colored themself with hope
In the mob of lonely cold
Where winter hugs the heat
A warm breeze of joy floats by
Among odors oppressive
Depression's burnt distaste
Laughter's fragrance takes you by surprise
Forget the bitter aftertastes and sour first impressions
Rolling off the tup of your tongue--
Sweetest memory tickles your senses
Pull your thoughts aside---
If only for a moment.
Copyright ©
EternitysLyre
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2004-04-21 08:29:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Buoyancy
(User Rating: 1 ) by n2dep2care on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 08:33:29 AM AEST (User
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If you think this SUCKS, I would LOVE to read something from you that you think is great! This was truly awesome! Loved it!
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Re: Buoyancy
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:04:48 AM AEST (User
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Stunningly beautiful..."sweetest memory tickles your senses"..what a nice conclusion well done my friend. venkat |
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Re: Buoyancy
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 07:38:29 AM AEST (User
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*grins* I like the sensuality of this one. It really spoke to me, personally, in an intimate way. I like the way you describe depression as having a burnt distaste. Pleasantly pictorial and thought provoking to the utmost.
Commendations. |
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Re: Buoyancy
(User Rating: 1 ) by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:39:35 PM AEST (User
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I have to agree completely with neptunes, great write. This should get 10 stars!
Lindsey |
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