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We'll see the sun

Contributed by rhei76 on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:15:45 PM in AEST
Topic: spiritual



We'll see the sun
just like they want us to
We'll eladorate and make
it not so confussed
Just to feel the light
like their suppose to
We'll help ourselves
as we're helping you

Cause, things are different
and weren't meant to be all the same
So, some are god-sent
but all things must change

We'll see the sun
just like they want us to
Keep the pace of fun
Just because we do
We'll help them feel the light
So they won't blame it on you
and we'll hide inside you
As we try ourselves

Cause we'll feel the light
and darkness be all forgottend
So we'll share that light
for all things must change

So feel the sun like you do
Find the moon, it's for you
Laugh as one in the dew
Cause, this room was made for
you




Copyright © rhei76 ... [ 2004-04-20 20:15:45]
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Re: We'll see the sun (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:27:28 PM AEST
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The poems good and it could have been excellent if you could fix the spelling errors because it takes away from the perfection of this piece. I loved the title, the overall feel of the poem, the flow etc. I really liked it alot.

Kie


Re: We'll see the sun (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:38:23 AM AEST
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Aah..this is sooo heart warming..welldone. venkat




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