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Daddy
Contributed by
eternallyloved
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 06:23:22 PM in AEST
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Daddy, you hold me,
protect me, guide me.
Daddy, you love me,
trust me, provide me.
Daddy, my refuge,
my strength, my power.
Daddy, my existence,
my creator, my tower.
Daddy, I hurt you,
hid from you, return to you.
Daddy, I declare you,
praise you, yearn for you.
Daddy, please take me,
brake me, heal me.
Daddy, please lead me,
save me, fill me.
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Re: Daddy
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 06:41:38 PM AEST
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| wonderful expression of feelings, you should show him this, its lovely:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Daddy
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 07:22:39 PM AEST
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I could feel you calling out in this poem and it really pulled at my heart. I agree with Nessa and you should show him this poem if possible. This poem was incredible from start to finish.
Kie |
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Re: Daddy
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by evryrose on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:32:03 AM AEST
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Excelent write...perhaps I got a different impression than other commenters, but I see this "daddy" as not your earthly father, but as your heavenly father
always.
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