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If I could pt.3
Contributed by
luckycharm
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 06:17:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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If I could take this pain,
And put it away I would,
If I could walk the sea,
And a gate to heaven would open,
I would continue my journey,
To make all of my worries go away,
A girls shattered heart that is broken into pieces,
And you are not able to glue my heart back together,
I leave you only a memory of me,
And that is it,
All I remember about you was that smile,
That use to make me blush,
If I could spare you I would,
But like I keep on saying,
When I started this journey,
It was only me and it will stay like that,
When I look at you,
You make me wanna just cry,
Cause I waited so long,
Just to get you and feel your touches,
But it ain't the same like it was before,
Misery keeps coming my way,
So I have to release you for now,
Cause I remain in tears,
This girl would change everything,
Only if I could
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Re: If I could pt.3
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by xoblondiebabix3 on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 06:25:57 PM AEST
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this is an awesome write! xcellent job
i can rilly relate to it:~)
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Re: If I could pt.3
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by eternallyloved on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 06:36:11 PM AEST
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So beautifully written and impressive.
"A girls shattered heart that is broken into pieces,
And you are not able to glue my heart back together,"
I love these lines.
I am so sorry if you ever felt like this.
Keep up the good work.
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Re: If I could pt.3
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:01:45 PM AEST
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awesome ending
Lindsey |
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