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ALIVE AND KICKING
Contributed by
justinblue
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:40:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Up, down
Smile then a frown
Whats the deal
Happy, sad is how I feel
I say shucks, shucks, shucks
When I should feel luck
I sit here alive
Instead of takeing the big dive
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2004-04-20 17:40:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ALIVE AND KICKING
(User Rating: 1 ) by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:57:36 PM AEST (User
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I like this poem, i like the way in flows. Good write.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: ALIVE AND KICKING
(User Rating: 1 ) by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 01:59:58 PM AEST (User
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Just happy to be alive, that's better than sad depressed and lonely. Good poem. |
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