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Her
Contributed by
lil_angel
on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:09:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am sorry that I doubted you
I should have known better
You promised me you would stay true
Just angered me that
SHE was always
There
Giggling in the back ground
Like a little school girl
I should know that you would never
Caress another
Or share yourself
With anyone
But me
My imagination got away from me
Dreams clouded my mind
Jokes dug into me like a tapeworm
Words and lies stuck in my
Head with no escape
You promised yourself to me
And told me that I was your goddess
And that you would never leave me
Or cause me pain
I look back at it now
And have to laugh at myself for being so dumb
You were great about it like always
Shocked that I was worried
And forgave me in half a heart beat
I love you ever so much
She is back with him, so no longer will it bug me so much
Do me a favor though
Remind HER that you are taken
And that your girl knows how to hide bodies well.
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Re: Her
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:14:50 PM AEST
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remind me not to upset you! (last line of poem) this poem was direct and to the point well done.
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Re: Her
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:22:30 PM AEST
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hope the reminder is taken well, i would do well to step back and RUN AWAY!! lol... great rant, good write, i like it! ;0)
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Re: Her
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:06:25 PM AEST
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"remind HER that you are taken
and that your girl knows how to hide bodies well"
lol, I hope HE doesn't get scared away by that...good write.
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Re: Her
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by Dina on
Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 12:33:53 AM AEST
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| I guess after this threat to both of them, he will never ever think of losing you. Your great love shows quite well. You did a great job describing your true feelings. Good Luck. |
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