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Today
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:08:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life can change
In the blink of an eye.
It can make us laugh,
Or bring tears to the eyes.
We try to control
Where freedom reigns.
We suffocate our peace
Like a dove in chains.
Live for today!
Release all your fears.
Submit yourself daily,
Let God come near.
Our Father above
Meant for us to be free.
He sent us His Son,
To give us liberty.
Yet anxiety, anger,
And anguish run free
When the life of today
Should be all that we need.
Why live for tomorrow?
Live for today.
Cherish the moment.
Put your worries away.
Live life to the fullest.
Never cease to enjoy it.
For with every fresh breath
Is born a new moment.
Be happy. Be joyful.
Smile and love.
Today might be the last day
You're given from above.
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eatfresh22
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2004-04-20 16:08:00]
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Re: Today
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:11:21 PM AEST
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Hello and a warm welcome to YPDC.
This was an excellent poem. Inspirational and speaks highly of your faith.
I can see that you have alot of talent and i'm impressed with your poem.
Kie |
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Re: Today
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:17:56 PM AEST
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uplifting and inspirational.
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Re: Today
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:20:15 PM AEST
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hum... live for now, i know to... yet sometimes a fresh reminder is nice... good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Today
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:20:26 PM AEST
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"Like a dove in chains."... I really liked that line. Awesome. Keep posting.
Live for today,
Eat at subway
He he,,, kinda rhymed...
Yeah, take care.
David |
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Re: Today
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by Justalady on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:42:40 PM AEST
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| Having live a long life... almost 67, I finally have seen that yesterday is gone and nothing I do can change it. This is an inspiring poem and one should take note of it's words. June |
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Re: Today
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:55:05 PM AEST
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Bravo! I like the portrayal of grief, anxiety and anger being a chain. So true...
Well done. treat yourself to a subway sandwich. You deserve it.
Andrew |
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Re: Today
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:57:10 PM AEST
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Awesome!!! A refreshing inspiring poem... loved it very much...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Today
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:33:41 PM AEST
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Again, I like the way this flows. You've got a knack for that. I also like the message sent with this wonderful write.
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: Today
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:12:01 PM AEST
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Lovely write. It screams of inspiration from Matthew 6:34- Therefore do not worry about tomorrow, for tomorrow will worry about its own things. Sufficient for the day is its own trouble.
Yet a verse I have a daily struggle with applying, finding a balance between planning and true worry. God bless.
Em
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