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Forever Lost
Contributed by
eatfresh22
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Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:01:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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I am a lost soul wandering
In this deserted place
I know not where I stand
Nor which enemies I''ll face.
The sword of truth
Is my only tool
To help me fight,
To get me through.
An alien to the world
I don''t fit it
I walk in righteousness
They live in sin.
I run away
Yet they seem to follow
Enticing me with
Their ways of horror.
I shun evil
And throw aside frivalry
For I prefer peace
Over pain and misery.
I know now where I stand
And I stand here firm
For I''m in God''s arms
And am safe and secure.
I shouldn''t fit in
With a world of hate
So I continue my journey
To Your waiting gate.
I''ve traversed for so long
But I''ve found You at last
I look into the future
I reflect on the past.
Your gentle eyes
And caring face
Are filled with love,
Forgiveness, and grace.
Thanks for Your Love
And waiting so patiently
For me to run from my sin
And seek You fervently.
Now I am forever lost
Lost in Your glorious face
Lost in Your holiness
Lost in your Almightly grace.
Copyright ©
eatfresh22
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2004-04-20 16:01:09]
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Re: Forever Lost
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:05:56 PM AEST
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A beautifully written first post, i liked the twist to the forever lost theme. well done
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Re: Forever Lost
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 04:14:46 PM AEST
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hum... this is so peaceful, revitalizing, good writing, uplifting... i like it! ;0)
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Re: Forever Lost
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:13:05 PM AEST
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Who would ever think that it would be good to be "Forever Lost"? Weird people...
Welcome to YPDC Carrie!
Keep posting poems.
Take care.
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Re: Forever Lost
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:51:31 PM AEST
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None too bad! Welcome aboard. Enjoy your stay. Meals are provided in the lobby. If there's anything you need, just let us know.
Andrew |
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Re: Forever Lost
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:25:51 PM AEST
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Re: Forever Lost
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by cubby33 on
Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 06:06:57 PM AEST
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Very good Carrie! I thought this poem was really encouraging for me to stand up and be a stranger to this world. Sometimes we just want to fall and fit in with everyone else but yeah good poem!
Keep writing, Jacob |
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Re: Forever Lost
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 11:51:29 PM AEST
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Carrie...
Welcome aboard... beautifully written... I felt very much at peace reading it...
Thanks for ur comment on "What's In A Name?" Glad u liked it...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Forever Lost
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:31:26 PM AEST
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Truly inspired. I like the twist in the title. What a rhythmic and spiritually peaceful write.
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Re: Forever Lost
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:26:59 PM AEST
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Excellent write! One of my favorite verses, Hebrews 11:13, has a similar concept- being strangers in this world :-)
It's good to be an alien on such a strange planet. How thankful I am to know this wretched earth isn't home!
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